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My Path

On the path far back away Lies the tower in decay Once a viverent light did display To light my path and guide my way Now so far, this beautiful day the light burns bright, it's warming rays the path is long, I stop to lay I find a guide beyond compare It bids me up, and sins it bares Along the path I must take care to live the law, to this end I swear Along the path I meet anothers stare From whence you came? From back there? Join me hence my sweet fair to the promised land and eternity grace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/7/2016 3:34:00 AM
JOHN DAVID,,,, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 5/2/2016 11:03:00 AM
John, nice to see this one again. Hope to see a new one from you soon. LINDA
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:48:00 PM
I like this. Peace and many blessings to you.
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:49:00 PM
John, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/14/2016 8:38:00 AM
John,, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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