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If to be a winner, I must first suck up, Then instead, I will gladly lose. If to gain popularity means kissing butt, Then a path alone I will seek and choose. If to climb the ladder is scoring brownie points, Then a different ladder I will choose to seek, A ladder where is required integrity and virtue And having such will not get me treated like a freak. I will not blindly follow along the path of others, On the path of least resistance the majority on, trod; Where the path accepts, condones lesser traits And where I'll be led away from the Lord, my God. The ridicule of humans, the whispers behind my back, Will not a bloody difference to me ever make Nor tempt me to change my course of direction, Knowing the path well traveled also hosts the fake. When one has experienced the dishonesty of others, The betrayal by many and lack of trustworthiness, The superficial charm of wolves dressed as sheep, One then seeks to avoid all such human shallowness. My Path in life has been a tough row to hoe, With many wishing I would fail all along the way, But all's given me strength and courage to persevere And tremendous insight that in my poetry I portray. If by a 'muse' I am directed, then my Muse is God, For it is He who has Gifted me, therefore is deserving Of my praise, appreciation, my deepest gratitude And through it all He Loves me, while humans are reserving. Written by Artsieladie/Sharon Donnelly ©2017-07-11 10:29:00 (EDT) All rights reserved

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Date: 5/16/2018 9:36:00 PM
Adding this one to my fav list, and its honesty and light is so very refreshing..
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/5/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thank you again, Robert, and for fav'ing. In regards to your previous comment (limited characters dilemma), I agree. I appreciate your thoughts. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 5/16/2018 9:33:00 PM
BRAVO! Superb honesty and sentiment my friend. I have myself written several such similar. Modern poetry will never measure up to the old classics but many that care not for the meaningful poetry, write and live to taunt, ridicule those that do. World is full of backbiters my friend.
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/5/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. Honesty = best policy to cultivate & especially's needed in this corrupt, dishonest world. Much of my poetry's written about character, hoping to encourage folks to value good character above all for humanity's moral compass to be prevailing. I don't write to conform; in a complicated, highly metaphoric style, but easy to understand & no analysis needed. All the best. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 5/14/2018 1:54:00 PM
Love this. It is truly an honest view of how things are in this world today.
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/5/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thank you, Cassandra, and it gets increasingly more difficult to maintain in this world today which can be/get very discouraging at times to stay on the road less traveled. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 5/14/2018 11:51:00 AM
Love this, Sharon! Excellent rhythm & rhyme, and above all shows strength and character!
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/5/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. My Mother always taught me the best to cultivate is a good character above all else, because good character is a person's greatest asset. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 5/14/2018 9:00:00 AM
Very positive poetry...good message too...All the best
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/5/2018 3:54:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo. All the best to you as well. :) ~ Artsie
Date: 5/14/2018 7:23:00 AM
A very honest assessment of people and lives around us. Stay the course..your words of courage speak volumes.
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 6/5/2018 3:53:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay, for your thoughts. I like to encourage folks to be their own person; to be their best. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie

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