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My Parting Gifts

Are there words enough to say goodbye? Words to give you answers why When someone leaves you all alone Are there words to keep you strong? Here's my parting gift to you Nothing gold, just drops of rain reminding you that nothing's gone May I leave you this one thought Love never dies, but carries on Here's a river, left for you It changes into something new Just as raindrops falling down fills a river, with new songs Ever changing, but never gone Beyond the landscape of a different time, where I must go alone, you will see the sun goes down, and there will be a star for you Nights will unfold a fragile place. Paths I've walked will be the same. Love, lives on, across the cold, beyond the landscape to enfold another way, a different time
__________________________________________ 2/21/16 For "My Parting Gifts" contest Sponsor : Viv Wigley

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Date: 9/2/2016 4:22:00 PM
So wonderful to share the winners’ list with your great poetry..Congrats on awesome work..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2016 1:37:00 PM
Carrie, such a wonderful flow you always carry dear lady...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/2/2016 7:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie, for your WIN with this brilliant piece!! ;-)
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Date: 3/2/2016 7:56:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:42:00 PM
I've been away and missed your voice. This has such tender longing to it. Ever changing but never gone is so apropos.
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Date: 2/23/2016 7:40:00 PM
A heart felt verse - hope you are having a great 2016! Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2016 2:32:00 AM
What greater gift could one receive. You, dear girl are a magnificent writer. Love this. Elaine
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:45:00 PM
Very touching piece :)
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