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Dear husband, kiss me lovingly... this is my last farewell to you. Hold close those photos...you and me... to reminisce the love we knew. My children, dear, farewell I say... within my heart, you'll always be. Safeguard my paintings as a way to keep the heart and soul of me. Grandchildren, dear, goodbye, you five... for this deep hurt, there is no balm. My poetry please keep alive, so babes of yours know great-grand mom. February 10, 2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: My Parting Gifts Sponsor: Viv Wigley Judged: 09/01/2016 Theme: "Imagine that a bus has pulled up outside your house, men in suits knock on your door, and after a brief conversation, you have to leave. Now. No packing your bags, there isn't time. All you have time for is to leave three pieces of advice to the loved ones you're leaving behind since you're never coming back."

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Date: 9/10/2016 5:23:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2016 5:27:00 PM
Beautiful sweet Sandra, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/2/2016 8:36:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 2/12/2016 2:47:00 AM
What a great entry Sandra! Great advise to your loved ones! Good luck in the contest my friend.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/15/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. It was sad to write this. I appreciate your visit, positive comment and wishes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/10/2016 3:54:00 PM
I love this and how you formatted it and put the challenge on the bottom. Everything about it is perfect. this is one I have been wanting to do. Sure wish i had thought up your idea for it!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/10/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for your supportive comment. It was sad to write! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/10/2016 2:47:00 PM
You will leave them with beautiful memories artwork and poetry through your amazing talents Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/10/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. It was very painful to even think about writing this :( Thanks for your uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra

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