My Parents

O my Parents, on you I m willing to sacrifice My faith, my love,my heart,my life and my future wife For the contest " when one line is not enough " Sponsor " silent one " 28 Syllables, 14 syllables per line

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/9/2018 10:13:00 PM

Congrats, Faraz, on your podium finish. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2018 8:13:00 PM

You love them so much!! Congrats on your win, Faraz.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/4/2018 11:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2018 10:57:00 PM

Great verse, Faraz, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2018 8:02:00 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 7:26:00 AM

A great two liner, Faraz. Many congrats on your win Elaine

Silent One

Date: 6/4/2018 6:30:00 AM

Lovely dedication to your parents.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..