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My Pain

The pain is real Can't you see The pain is real Deep inside of me! These cuts are real My arms are scarred These cuts are real My legs are marred! These thoughts are real Suicide I contemplate These thoughts are real My mind I can't escape! The pain will fade These cuts will heal These thoughts will stop When I am no longer here!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/28/2016 12:43:00 AM

Hi Cassie, I was hoping to see a new one from you. :) Luv LINDA

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/18/2016 1:16:00 AM

Cassie, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2016 12:47:00 PM

Cassie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Cassie Bradshaw
Date: 5/15/2016 1:09:00 PM

Thank you! Apologize for late reply, but I truly appreciate the support I get here.

Moon Flower

Date: 5/14/2016 6:08:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Cassie. :)

Cassie Bradshaw
Date: 5/15/2016 1:09:00 PM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 11:52:00 PM

Deep writing Cassie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cassie Bradshaw
Date: 5/14/2016 12:20:00 AM

Thank you! I will post more, not all of mine are dark. I write strictly based on my personal struggles and triumphs. Always from the heart whether good or bad. I have read a few of your poems and can relate greatly!! - Fellow Texan Born and Raised!!