My Pain

blood drips down locked the door the stinging starts to fade everything becomes a blur i know lay in the tub in the cold water my my arms stings then the pain fades i go under hopping not to come back up for air and i feel my body going numb i open my mouth to get a water in and blood i tell myself to stay under and then everything fads away no more pain my heart stops the pain leaves me my dead body is in the tub TO NEVER BE FOUND AGAIN untill someone starts looking for me when they find my body it will be to late

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Sierra Biersack

Date: 6/16/2011 11:21:00 AM

This is soo deeply written boo. Have you ever felt that as if you wanted it to happen so bad you almost had to try it? I almost tried it before. Shh its a secret thoo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2011 6:27:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andrea. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol