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My Pact With the Lollipop Boy

~My Pact With The Lollipop Boy When I was nine I made a pact with a boy If I am not married in fifteen years will you be my toy? He answered between the lollypop licks Of course I’ll marry you - but was he "taking the mick"? The boy then left with his mum and dad I went to his leaving party- it made me quite sad. The pact I had made with a sticky lollipop boy Now he had gone to Australia there will be no marriage joy. I grew but never forgot the skinny sticky boy that captured my heart I’d remember the days we said we would never part We swapped toy racing cars and penknives so cool We played on his climbing frame, we were nobody’s fools. We played knock and run the neighbours we did annoy The skinny- freckled girl, and the sticky lollipop boy. Ten years passed then I heard through the grape vine My lollipop boy had returned from Oz- but for good this time. We met, he was tall and he remembered so well Our pact we had made as young kids, it was swell We dated and courted and fell in love Our pact came true and we fit like a hand in a glove. The only thing wrong with our fifteen year pact Was it happened in twelve years and that is a fact.
"Taking the mick" means joking or foooling about for those that do not understand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/3/2012 10:35:00 AM
So, you were 'The skinny-freckled girl' hope you still are... could be soup mail check it out...
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula Swanson's "Pact" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 4:44:00 PM
Beautifully written love story, I love it! Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:33:00 PM
i love the fact that this is true! how great! you've done a wonderful job retelling it on poetry. congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/20/2012 12:08:00 PM
Just charming! Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/20/2012 8:46:00 AM
It this is a true story, makes it even more enjoyable to read! What a wonderful pact indeed! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:12:00 AM
Mandy congrats on another cracking win..David
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:28:00 PM
What a romantic story and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/10/2012 9:11:00 PM
wow, is this your true marriage story?? SO COOL and that you could get this great entertaining poem from it. I think it should do really well in the contest. (thanks for "taking the mick" translation).
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Date: 5/10/2012 12:56:00 PM
starry-eyed lollipop story, mandy.. charming write.. best wishes and hugggs!;)
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:30:00 AM
What a wonderful love story! if only it were that easy for everyone. Is this based on a true story? Or for the pact contest? Or both? :)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/10/2012 6:51:00 AM
It is based on a true story Susan just slightly adapted for the the pact, and thanks for commenting xx
Date: 5/10/2012 1:48:00 AM
Mandy Just love this, nothing wrong with sticky fingers ha ha ha..David
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/10/2012 6:50:00 AM
Ha ha thanks david xx

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