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My Own Little Mystery

I think it was your eyes, they are to me, So beautiful, serene, a perfect dream. Wound up, flustered, lost, amazed and alive. More so than anyone could imagine to be. With your skin of copper, that tastes so sweet, Along you hips, for your sweet ecstasy. Blinded by my own hidden reveries, What it is that gets me, I still can't see. I know you've been hurt, I hear your plea, Open your heart and give me the key. I don't know what they say or do or see, But I promise, they don't get you like me. See, sometimes your body makes me wonder, About how perfect you feel against me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/5/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Daniel Ashcraft
Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Carol!
Date: 9/4/2012 6:17:00 PM
DANIEL, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Daniel Ashcraft
Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much! I was suprised to see i made it that far in the contest!
Date: 9/1/2012 12:09:00 PM
Daniel, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your lovely love poem. Love, Joyce
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Daniel Ashcraft
Date: 9/5/2012 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Joyce! I appreciate the warm words!
Date: 8/26/2012 8:23:00 PM
DANIEL, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD
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Daniel Ashcraft
Date: 9/5/2012 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much!!! I was wondering why i kept getting so many emails haha!!!

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