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My Orchestra

She can pluck on one lonely string, or fill me with her orchestra, when my heart plays her symphony. Visual 3 Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 01.01.2015 Contest: 3 BY 8 Image

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 7:56:00 AM

This is an awesome and wonderful poem. Its nice spending some time here.. It feels so quality and deserving. Great pen friend

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2015 1:09:00 PM

Oh the symphony's that the heart can play...beautifully done.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/14/2015 8:58:00 AM

Good morning Brenda. I enjoyed reading this one again.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/14/2015 8:16:00 AM

Lovely lines, Brenda...stopping by to say hi. I haven't seen you around. Dylan was asking me if you had any new poems for him. I hope you're ok...hugs, Rhonda

Tim Smith

Date: 1/12/2015 11:14:00 PM

Haven't seen you in a bit. Hope all is well...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/9/2015 7:16:00 PM

Stunning as always! love, Armand!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/9/2015 5:42:00 PM

You have a very accomplished heart!

David Meade

Date: 1/8/2015 10:01:00 PM

Hey, I missed this gem . . . I love the music. Well done dear friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/8/2015 4:39:00 PM

Brenda, wonderful write in just a few words. I assume you are talking about a child, when you love that person, whatever noise they make it is like music to your ears. To see their smile when they have accomplished something that is worth more than anything 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/6/2015 6:54:00 AM

Beautiful Brenda.. :) I have one like this too but unfortunately the contest has been closed before i could ever enter it.. :)!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 6:58:00 AM

this could have been my entry : Hark! Hark! I hear string and brass sigh... thrum! thrum! tom-tom in whirlpool beats/// they flood in notes of glee, I cry!.. :D!