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My One and Only

My One and Only…. Why am I smiling? After having walked a mile I am seeing you My One and Only… If I could bend the wind I would have flown To see the one I call mine You are more beautiful Than any dove Among the reasons I am so much in love Not just on the outside Do you thrill me! But inside too There is no need to look for another Now, that I have My One and Only… Shawn Young (3/29/2016) Copy Write

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2016 10:18:00 AM

Shawn, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Shawn Young
Date: 3/29/2016 12:21:00 PM

Linda, thank you for the welcome. I will follow-up on your suggestions. Poetic Skills? I don't really know if that fits me. I am exploring to determine if I have any skills. From time to time I have said or written things that friends have felt I should publish. I do enjoy reading others poems and often find myself filled with awe as the writers capture some unique or universal truth, emotion, etc. I welcome your friendship and critique All The Best Shawn