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My Obsession

My obsession.. like moth to a flame This love for him will never cease We've said, 'what will be, will be' Dreams do die, but once Their ashes tell truths Always alive In my soul Breathing Him

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/26/2010 3:17:00 AM

Yes, I agree with Wilma! Well written Nonet, Audrey! And thank you for your kind comments! Have a nice week!...Gert :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/24/2010 12:16:00 PM

Audrey, I just love the opening line of your nonet. Exquisite!! My weekend's been great thanks. Pity mine is over ;( enjoy the rest of yours love Wilma

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/24/2010 3:05:00 AM

One of my Favs for sure! Much happiness to you dear! Joy (Jew)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/23/2010 10:08:00 PM

Love is crazy indeed dear. ..and this is sweet !glad to be reading you,Celene.

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 10/22/2010 2:36:00 PM

Exquisite write!

James Peranteau

Date: 10/22/2010 11:37:00 AM

When it's hot it's hot ! Passion fills your slip here dear poet...great write ! much love, james

De R

Date: 10/22/2010 5:24:00 AM

Loved the comparison in the first line. Be careful, obsessions are not very healthy. A great nonet, Audrey! Emilia

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/21/2010 8:36:00 PM

Hahaha! Not to worry seafaress! It's not that extreme, I promise you..lol Glen Close was beyond "obsessed"! I'm not that brave.. Now that was a Thriller! e-mail ! Much love to ya!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/21/2010 8:25:00 PM

Excellent, Dimples. But be careful: "Fatal Attraction" was a story of obsessive love and you may remember the havoc it wrought for Michael Douglas and his family. I do think you will handle your "obsession" much better than Glenn Close. LOL Great Nonet! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/21/2010 4:50:00 PM

Very soul searching introspective thoughts penned well

Michael Gelb

Date: 10/21/2010 4:12:00 PM

I liked your poem. Thanks for the comment to mine.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2010 3:50:00 PM

Very impressive love story in a few short lines..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2010 2:55:00 PM

A fabulous Nonet.. my fav form of poetry these day Audrey my BBF .. enjoyed this obsession with u as I have my own with Ron luv.. hope all is well with u ...

Daver Austin

Date: 10/21/2010 2:48:00 PM

This is so awesome, Audrey. I'm a fan. Love, Dave

Tobey Hill

Date: 10/21/2010 2:10:00 PM

lovely write Audrey...TAH