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My Night - Your Day

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My Night - Your Day

Of all the people in the world i knew
I mostly want to connect with you

My night is your day and your day my night
We are worlds apart, but i feel you near

Naked and enveloped in our embrace
Passion we are both so desperate to taste

Distance preventing our bodies to unite
But in our minds together it feels so right

Ponder opportunity knowing our time will come
A place where our day and night become one

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:20:00 AM
    You write of love so beautifully.. an inspiration to all... lovely on all sides... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:00:00 AM
    Sweetness! :o) you remind me of myself.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 12:09:00 PM
    Shaz, again very romantic, I love romance...David

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 4:36:00 AM
    I've been there, done that. What a wonderful poem you have written Shaz!

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Hi Shaz great write of love, will be back to read more soon

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 7:43:00 AM
    Absolutely beautiful Shaz! Very gentle and passionate -Stephen

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 4:55:00 AM
    Pure fantasy of love!! Love it!!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 11:16:00 AM
    nicely written

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:42:00 AM
    Beautiful poem...this is number one in mine eyes. Thank you for sharing it Shaz. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 4:26:00 AM
    Very well put - and there are so many young couples who spend time a long way from each other. My husband and I were often in this situation when we were first married. Don't forget though that there are many on this website who are world's away but Poetry Soup brings them together. Nice to meet you.