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My Night - Your Day

Of all the people in the world i knew I mostly want to connect with you My night is your day and your day my night We are worlds apart, but i feel you near Naked and enveloped in our embrace Passion we are both so desperate to taste Distance preventing our bodies to unite But in our minds together it feels so right Ponder opportunity knowing our time will come A place where our day and night become one

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/8/2012 11:20:00 AM

You write of love so beautifully.. an inspiration to all... lovely on all sides... hugs Michael

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/1/2012 12:00:00 AM

Sweetness! :o) you remind me of myself.

David Williams

Date: 11/28/2012 12:09:00 PM

Shaz, again very romantic, I love romance...David

Victor Chavez

Date: 9/27/2012 4:36:00 AM

I've been there, done that. What a wonderful poem you have written Shaz!

Stephen Allen

Date: 5/21/2012 7:43:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Shaz! Very gentle and passionate -Stephen

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/21/2012 4:55:00 AM

Pure fantasy of love!! Love it!!

Kenisha Shines

Date: 5/20/2012 11:16:00 AM

nicely written

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2012 4:42:00 AM

Beautiful poem...this is number one in mine eyes. Thank you for sharing it Shaz. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox Anne-Lise

Josie Whitehead

Date: 5/20/2012 4:26:00 AM

Very well put - and there are so many young couples who spend time a long way from each other. My husband and I were often in this situation when we were first married. Don't forget though that there are many on this website who are world's away but Poetry Soup brings them together. Nice to meet you.