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My New Truck

My New Truck 6/30/13 Finally got a brand new truck. How did I have such awesome luck? I wish it would run, I’d have much fun, It’s sadly, in the driveway, stuck.

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Roy Jerden

Date: 7/22/2013 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy

Russell Smith

Date: 7/21/2013 4:28:00 PM

Congrats on your fine winning entry

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/22/2013 5:05:00 AM

Thanks Russell!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/21/2013 4:01:00 PM

Hope you've got it running by now..this is great! congrats. BG

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/22/2013 5:05:00 AM

Thanks Barbara!! Glad you liked it...Jim

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/21/2013 2:54:00 AM

Hi Dr Jim congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/21/2013 12:38:00 PM

Thanks Shadow!! Appreciate your response...Jim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2013 1:25:00 AM

this is a really cute one. Congrats on your win.

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/21/2013 12:39:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Glad you liked it...Jim

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/20/2013 9:16:00 PM

Looks like you ran out of the awesome luck...funny :) Congratulations on your win :)

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/21/2013 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Karen!! Luck lasts for such a short time LOL...Jim

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2013 8:19:00 PM

Dr Jim, A good winning poem. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/21/2013 12:41:00 PM

Thx Skat!! Glad you liked it....Jim

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/20/2013 8:12:00 PM

I'm really 'stuck' on this hilarious limerick Dr. Jim!...Congratulations on a well deserved win sir - Tim

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/21/2013 12:43:00 PM

Thanks Tim!! Yep, stuck again!!! Glad you liked it...Jim

Heather Ober

Date: 7/20/2013 7:14:00 PM

Loved this one :) Good, clean humour! Congrats on your win in my contest!

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/20/2013 7:19:00 PM

Thanks Heather!! Glad you liked it...Jim

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2013 7:07:00 PM

I like the limerick Jim, hope you get the truck working. i have a car, stuck and in the way. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/1/2013 5:25:00 AM

Thank you Skat!! Glad you liked it...Jim

April Gabriella

Date: 6/30/2013 5:21:00 PM

I love this! The exact thing happened with me and my car. We'd have such fun if it wasn't broken in the driveway. UGH.

Drjim Martin
Date: 7/1/2013 5:26:00 AM

Thanks April. Glad you liked it....Jim