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Disappointment So deep it severs the heart strings. Pain So sharp it cuts right to the core. Doubt squeezing out the breath of life. Confusion As to the choices made. Panic's arrows Piercing the curtain of silence. Depression Settling like a shroud of darkness. Shame For the person you've become. Guilt Because you can't break free. Alcohol's my name, Destruction's my game.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/6/2015 8:06:00 AM
Well Penned, Janice. And absolutely true. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:51:00 PM
JANICE, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/20/2015 12:50:00 PM
Janice, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Janice Hinkeldey
Date: 3/22/2015 9:17:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Any comments are greatly appreciated.
Date: 3/14/2015 7:04:00 PM
Janice, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Janice Hinkeldey
Date: 3/22/2015 9:15:00 PM
Thanks for your note. I like to write poetry it serves as a release. Any comment on my poetry is greatly appreciated.

Book: Shattered Sighs