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My Muse Was Not Amused

My Muse Was Not Amused ME: "Muse, I cannot write those words! What thoughts would he think of me?" MUSE: "Child, you must not be absurd. Allow my spirit to set you free." ME: "But what if he doesn't understand? I fear to write what I dread to say." MUSE: "Trust and let him take your hand. He'll not lead your heart astray." ME: "What if he's turned away, and it's too late? Perhaps he gave up and has found another." MUSE: "What ifs and perhaps? Open your garden gate. Lie in the arms of one who wants to be your lover." ME: "Thank you, Mother Muse, for your gentle thought." MUSE: "Keep them folded, daughter, always in your heart." 10/25/15

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Date: 10/27/2015 4:46:00 PM
Writing poetry in a dialogical form is quite difficult. This was so clever and thoughtful. Loved it!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2015 5:10:00 PM
I don't think I've ever used or heard 'dialogical' before seeing it here. Thanks for the introduction and your remarks. ;)
Date: 10/25/2015 7:02:00 PM
Precious - I really enjoyed your creativity ... CayCay
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Date: 10/25/2015 7:29:00 PM
Thank you a whole bunch, CayCay.
Date: 10/25/2015 2:52:00 PM
So unique and creative! I love it
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 3:01:00 PM
hi, Elis. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I felt a bit like a ventriloquist. lol

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