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My Mountain Hike

The view is overwhelming, such beauty, while so meek Through the trees I see astounding snow capped peaks The different levels of wonder, gloriously grand Seeing the spectacular Mountain, proudly as it stands Tall tress all around , fresh pine I smell A deep breath I take, peace within me dwells Pondering which way to continue natures hike To reach the pointed summit, the Mountains delight Continuing my climb over rocky terrain Air getting thinner, more excitement I gain Above my site high in the cloudy sky An eagle spreads his winds, while echoing his cry Howling is heard, a proud grey wolf appears Glaring eyes upon my own I shiver as he nears Frozen in place he walks past, eyes still a glare He disappears into the trees he growled with a dare My journey continues as I come closer to the top So beautiful and breathless I surely had to stop I sat upon a log to gaze at a beautiful fawn Drinking from a crystal lake, playing on natures lawn Finally, top of the mountain, I have reached my destination Relaxed as I view Gods’ beautiful creations I lay back, close my eyes, in my peaceful serene place Where nature calms your heart, God will touch your face!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/29/2008 8:04:00 PM
Catherine - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:07:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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