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My Mother's Eyes

If I'd not known my mother's eyes Perhaps the sky would hold more blue If I'd not seen my mother smile Perhaps the sunrise on the hill, would shine in gold... in bolder hues If I had never felt her touch, while brushing tears beneath my lash with gentle hands, that tucked a curl, behind my ears, those simple tasks Perhaps the softness of the breeze Would be a soothing, more gentle....pleasing Or sprinkled raindrops more refreshing... If I had never felt her arms enfold me Perhaps the sun would be more warming If I had never heard her voice the softness of her gentle voice the hum of comfort in the night the lullaby that spoke of love Perhaps the song of nightingales Or whispered coos when evening calls Would sound more clear and sweeter to my wanting ear But as it is......her love was all the love that filled me to the brim was not a whim, nor false recall As beautiful as nature is, it does fall short...in what was then Such loveliness cannot compare ______________________________________ For PD's Mother's Day Contest

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Date: 5/18/2013 9:40:00 AM
Very nicely done. Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/17/2013 7:17:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:12:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS,CARRIE ! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in the contest "Mother" sponsored by A Rambling Poet. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/8/2010 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. This is lovely. Love,Joyce
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Date: 5/8/2010 9:01:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Mother contest ...with thhis "beauty" .. a special win to enjoy and a Happy Mother's Day too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:19:00 AM
I have not used the word 'stupendous' before but in this instance nothing else fits. Both in the use of your words and the love that shines through. A beautiful poem Carrie well done....Margaret
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:27:00 AM
Such a touching tribute to your mom, Carrie :) I'm sure this is in the winner's list yet again :)
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:30:00 PM
Lovely. You are one talented lady. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:25:00 PM
carrie, you could write a huge book of all your poems and I would stay enthralled till the end of them! LIke with this. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/2/2010 3:36:00 PM
Well done. Good luck in the contest, thanks for the write,,IRMA
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