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My Mother

As the rain you washed off my tears As the wind you made my spirits high As the blanklet you protected me As the mirror you showed me who am As the book you made me learn this world As the pen you wrote my destiny As the word you gave me meaning As the dream you gave me confidence As the playground you taught me to rise after fall As the angel you came and bless my life – My sweet mother

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Date: 5/14/2017 9:17:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats!
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Saranya Sridharan
Date: 5/14/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Kim
Date: 5/13/2017 3:47:00 PM
Very nice, Saranya, congratulations on your win.
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Saranya Sridharan
Date: 5/13/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thanks eve
Date: 5/13/2017 2:13:00 PM
Saranya, I can feel your closeness to Mother Nature in this beautiful peace as well as to a mother. Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
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Saranya Sridharan
Date: 5/13/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Connie.
Date: 5/13/2017 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Saranya. Very strong roots of a sweet mother. Well put and motherly, Kai
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Saranya Sridharan
Date: 5/13/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks kai
Date: 11/5/2013 1:55:00 AM
well written......
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Saranya Sridharan
Date: 11/5/2013 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Sudesh :)
Date: 10/30/2013 11:57:00 AM
I loved your simple yet moving verses here. Mothers are precious gems, they should be treated as such.
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Saranya Sridharan
Date: 11/3/2013 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Mohammed for those wonderful comment :)

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