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March 1, 2024

For Mamma Contest of Silent One

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I didn’t know why the sky suddenly fell on us, we got deracinated, turned into derelict drift wood, until mother floated far, found an alien anchorage for us to feel the flow of our fervid life again. Times were truly tough in the squall of struggle, she strived for years, and made for us a home, where in her soiled hands she sculptured my life, and made me what I have become. Time came when my job took me away from her, but she promised to come one day to live with me. That day didn’t come, for she left the home she built, and went away to be in her new abode, not mine. As I travel down the memory lane, pine to ask why she didn’t keep her promise, I realize she had instead gone where she belonged, among the angels in the starry heaven. She has left me a long time ago for her new home, when in bleak night I see the north star shine to guide me to my final destination, I then know, she is the star sparkling with the angels now.

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Date: 3/11/2024 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "My Mother" is a wonderful/lovely Mother's Day write. Great Ending... Mine has also been gone for many years. Wish she was still here.. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:55:00 PM
Many thanks, Paula.
Date: 3/10/2024 9:19:00 AM
It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/14/2024 11:55:00 PM
Thank you, SO for the placement
Date: 3/1/2024 5:25:00 AM
Dear Subimal, your poem is a heartfelt tribute capturing the profound bond between a mother and child. The imagery of resilience, sacrifice, and love shines through your words. Your poignant reflections on loss and longing beautifully express the universal experience of grieving for a beloved mother. This is a deeply moving piece that resonates with the enduring memory of maternal love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/1/2024 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel for your visit. Your comments resonate with my feelings and my loss. I really miss my mother who could not be with me in her last days.

Book: Shattered Sighs