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My Mother

My mother didn’t cook too well And neither did she bake. If you’d assume she loved to clean, That would be a mistake. She didn’t drive, she didn’t work But she was always there. If comfort was required, well, She had the time to spare. If something needed fixing, She’s the one who’d man the tools And raising us, it’s she who made us Follow all the rules. She was athletic, playing tennis When she had the chance And at a party, she would be The first to start to dance. She loved her games and puzzles, Playing mah jongg every week And did crosswords in the paper, With an always-finish streak. My mom’s been gone for years, yet on Her birthday I recall That, despite her flaws, without her I would not be here at all.

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Date: 2/21/2024 8:38:00 PM
She sounds as though she was wonderfully fun and smart. Although her "flaws" are certainly minimal we certainly wouldn't be human without them. Your first stanza makes me think a little of myself. :)
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Date: 1/31/2024 7:01:00 AM
Hi Ilene, It is so nice to remember the positive traits of our mothers and what gifts they gave us. It's sounds like your mom had a lot of positive energy for life and was a good listener, wonderful character strengths. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:01:00 AM
I have traits in common with your mother, and you are so similar to my mother.
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Date: 1/27/2024 12:42:00 AM
that is so nice, your mother was an angel, we know that later, thanks .for the touching portrait
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Date: 1/26/2024 9:03:00 PM
That was wonderful. Your mother would be proud of you and your writing abilities. Your homespun journeys are treasures.
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Date: 1/26/2024 6:51:00 PM
A well-balanced portrait of your mom. Hugs
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Date: 1/26/2024 2:58:00 PM
aww what a lovely tribute - i bake and cook but detest cleaning lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2024 1:23:00 PM
Happy memories of your mother Ilene, She sounded like the life and soul of the party. Tom
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Date: 1/26/2024 10:35:00 AM
An absolute honest and very beautiful birthday tribute to your mum Ilene! Not all mums have to bake, clean etc….love and happiness comes in so many ways and a child knows when they are loved, safe and the number one priority in their parents lives! Your mum sounded amazing and good fun! Debx
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