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My Morning Song

You’re my love song in the morn, my babes in blue. Dressed in sweet smiles, my blessing of two. On God's path, I dance along with whom I belong, my joyous song. Canorous - tender souls grow strong, bright leaves on my tree lifelong, my future, my hope, my sunny view. You’re my love song in the morn, my babes in blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2015 10:48:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations. SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:08:00 AM
Beautiful melody Rhonda,, Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/23/2015 6:58:00 PM
So beautifully written, Rhonda, and what could be more lovely to write about than your two sweet boys. I loved reading it! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:12:00 PM
Wonderful invented write, Rhonda, congratulations on your win. 7 Blessings dear friend
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Date: 2/23/2015 11:57:00 AM
Wonderful write Rhonda...congrats on your win
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Date: 2/23/2015 11:29:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/23/2015 8:22:00 AM
I'm glad to see you in the top 10.
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:47:00 AM
Grats on your great poem and contest placement :) many smiles :)
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:16:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:55:00 AM
Rhonda, this is so cute. Seeing it again, I wish I had put it higher. soupmail for ya.
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Date: 2/12/2015 7:08:00 AM
This is so pretty!
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Date: 2/11/2015 11:04:00 AM
A lovely song -- not only in the morning but throughout the day into eternity. 7
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Date: 2/11/2015 7:08:00 AM
So tender and sweet. Babies definitely brighten any day.
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Date: 2/10/2015 5:26:00 PM
I really like Rhonda...your my sunny view..love that line...hugs Tim
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Date: 2/10/2015 4:16:00 PM
This is delightful Rhonda - good luck with the contest - i just have my middle word and first and last lines so far lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 5:23:00 PM
It is VERY challenging Rhonda hence the reason I have got so far with it ... not lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/10/2015 5:16:00 PM
I changed it and it's still wrong...I'm making this much more difficult than it should be!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/10/2015 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, Jan...I had to change it again. My c line's rhyme was wrong...another toughie! hugs, Rhonda

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