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My Morning

I wake in darkness lazily and loll around in bed, Just sifting through the rhymes that prance around inside my head. The dawn cracks open like an egg’s prize plop into a bowl; I scramble up to start my day and now I’m on a roll. What joy to delve into whatever book I might be reading. I’m coddled in the covers, all the comfort I am needing. Two chapters down, my sunny side is ready for the day. I head to my computer, see which comments came my way. When that is over, easy – time for juice and getting dressed; Three minutes later – out the door – an early walk is best. My breakfast waits when I return and, too, The New York Times; Hard-boiled reporters nail the news of politics and crimes. With coffee down, I shower and spiff up, for all is well; The morning is behind me, like the remnants of a shell. Ilene Bauer August 8, 2012 For Francine Roberts' "A Couplet Morning" contest

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Date: 10/9/2013 11:37:00 AM
Ilene, , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/4/2013 5:51:00 PM
Excellent, Ilene. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 10/2/2013 10:08:00 PM
Nicely done. I really like this poem and congratulations a well-deserved win.
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:46:00 PM
ILENE, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 8/14/2012 2:13:00 PM
Francine should like this couplet entry. I like it myself and think it is far better than my own.
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Date: 8/11/2012 4:31:00 AM
Loving this happy verse! Cynthia
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Date: 8/9/2012 12:19:00 PM
A morning poem, this is a good one. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck in the Contest. Lucilla
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:58:00 PM
This is SO clever...I would bet its a winner. BG
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Date: 8/8/2012 10:37:00 AM
Enjoyed your morning. Sounds relaxing. Clever how you kept referencing eggs in this piece :)
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