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My Moonlight Dream

Illuminated His face glows silvery-blue And now, he smiles His black hair waves in the wind But I know he is not mine I've been enlightened As my face glows with pleasure And now, I can smile My blonde hair waves in the wind For my dream came true tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/9/2011 9:42:00 PM
I really like how your Tankas fit together. They make a nice comparison and conjure up a story. Good job
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest J. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:35:00 AM
Pretty tankas here. I gues you get the black haired one in the second tanka? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/4/2011 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, J. Dover. Enjoyed! Annalise
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Date: 12/4/2011 9:38:00 AM
Well written Ms Dover. Congratulations
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Date: 11/27/2011 11:36:00 AM
wonderful write! enjoyed the read!
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