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My Moonlight Dream

His face glows silvery-blue
And now, he smiles
His black hair waves in the wind
But I know he is not mine

I've been enlightened
As my face glows with pleasure
And now, I can smile
My blonde hair waves in the wind
For my dream came true tonight

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  1. Date: 12/9/2011 9:42:00 PM
    I really like how your Tankas fit together. They make a nice comparison and conjure up a story. Good job

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest J. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 7:35:00 AM
    Pretty tankas here. I gues you get the black haired one in the second tanka? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 2:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on a very fine win, J. Dover. Enjoyed! Annalise

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 9:38:00 AM
    Well written Ms Dover. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 11:36:00 AM
    wonderful write! enjoyed the read!