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My Mommy

My mommy has elmos laugh. She is a part of the riverside staff. My mother is really short. Baketball is her favorite sport. Peanut is my mothers nickname. In basketball she brought her a-game. She loves me a whole bunch. She always takes me out to lunch. My love for her will never die. This is truly NOT a lie. This poem is finally over. Now she knows i love her. By: Cherica Eckiwaudah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 5:27:00 PM
I love you cherica... you are a very good friend i love the way you write
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Date: 7/27/2009 11:31:00 AM
Haha, the ending was really funny yet Touchy !! Keep it up !!
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Date: 6/27/2009 3:42:00 PM
cherica, you are so shallow when you write about yourmommy. go deep and speak of the 9months she carried you and nurture, and provided the necessaries fluids need to begin your beautiful formation within her womb. speak of the times she nagered you and brought you in the light of truth with her firm hand of correction. truly speak of her magnificence as God himself would praise her. my mommy and daddy are decease. truly they would be my treasures if they were alive. thank you.
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:44:00 AM
i loved the end that was my favorite part!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:44:00 PM
I love when people write about their mothers.....its beautiful, great write -Jessica
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Date: 6/6/2009 2:10:00 PM
This is a beautiful and delightful tribute to your mom! Thanks for your thoughtful comment and welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/4/2009 3:53:00 PM
Love reading this because am a great 'mummy' fan too and basket ball
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Date: 6/4/2009 2:31:00 PM
wow what a sweet one! Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2009 1:51:00 PM
Again, you express your feelings well. Vince
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Date: 6/4/2009 12:32:00 PM
Beautiful work, I'm sure peanut is honred to be a part of your poem...Raul
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Date: 6/4/2009 12:11:00 PM
She has probably always known you love her, Cherica, but now she has it in writing. Lovely thoughts in your poem! Love, Carolyn
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