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My Mistake

My mind astir, I lie awake, no way to make this anguish break that comes with guilt, it might return, a cursed time I cannot spurn, nor slay with amends, life at stake. In every creaking stroll I quake; leaving her to play makes me shake. My troubles with each new day churn, my mind astir. This is no dream, it's my mistake; no sleep is mine, I lie awake evenings grow cold, while she I yearn, and grim thoughts through my body burn. The shadow lurks; I twist and turn, my mind astir. Your Biggest Mistake Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo June 28, 2016

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Date: 7/8/2016 8:52:00 AM
Noel...this is amazing! I learned a whole new form from you :) I love the depth and mood of shadows behind your words...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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