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My Miss You Note

My thoughts idling in a deep dilemma of feelings and fear, like a land dry in drought, I start to crack, and I stop to hope. My longing for water continues for seasons, a mirage: a hallucination of water far far away from my thirst while portraits of memories moist my thoughts, they separate my fear from feelings. They make me miss...you again!

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Date: 6/28/2016 1:23:00 PM
Romeo, Awesome first post, You must be an accomplished writer. Hope to see you FLOURISH among this rock solid community of amateur poets. You are going to love it here. Fast;) Linda
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Date: 6/28/2016 12:22:00 PM
Wow, I just Read Aarons (ye) write about missing a certain gal. I'm extremely excited to read two poems about longing from new poets back to back. Makes it easier to understand the pain. A perfect 7 rant. I love everything about the write .skat
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