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My Mind Wanders

Decided to write about the ills of the world. Perhaps I'd need a bigger forum for such a vast undertaking. Now let me see, where should I start, with the Neanderthals? Well, methinks nothing much has changed since we became “civilized”. Wow! That was quite a stretch, The word civilized is open to interpretation. In my wee brain, it means acting in a civilized manner towards our fellow *****sapiens. Listening to the six o'clock news any day and you'd be hard pressed to find any examples of civilized behaviour. Is it just the mood I'm in today? NO! It's been like this since the dawn of time. I absolutely DO NOT UNDERSTAND!!! Can we justify it by saying. “It's who we are... a combative species?” There, that let's us off the hook. With today's modern technology methinks it will only get worse. We will all become detached from our feelings, robotic like the mechanical creatures that will some day be the rue of mankind. I don't want to be around to see it! © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 8/6/2015 10:08:00 AM
I don't think it's WHO we are... It's more like who we want to be... When morals break down... or greedy, selfish people can find control using hate we find wars and strife. There is always some one like that some where... Sad isn't it...
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:58:00 PM
I have been loving these new posts Jack... sorry I havnt been around as often to comment. I will get to it soon. This is indeed a very serious topic and you tackled it well! You are good at it all-the funny and the not so funny! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/5/2015 6:24:00 AM
Dearest Laura my love, whenever... please don't apologize! YOU ARE THE SWEETEST!!! xxxx
Date: 8/4/2015 9:25:00 AM
I had to check out this non limerick! Nicely done! I agree with your words!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/4/2015 9:37:00 AM
SURPRISE!!! A serious one!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx

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