My Mind Is Yours Part 1

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This poem started as another subject completely, and I somehow ended up here. writing about another dark topic. Part 2 on its way!

My mind is yours I think of you As I stab away at your heart I think of you As blood spatters all over my face I think of you As the life ebbs out of your vassal I think of you As my hate grew into a flowing river of your blood I think of you As you stare into space with those dead eyes I think of you As they bury you in a poppers grave I think of you A childhood robbed I think of you The hand of god stealing an alter boys innocence I think of you Rotting piece of flesh in the ground I think of you A hateful cruel man of no honor I think of you No more

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 10:27:00 AM

a good way to move on and let go to think no more of those that hurt us.. //olive eloisa

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/22/2015 10:16:00 PM

... ;)

Casarah Nance
Date: 2/23/2015 7:25:00 AM

xxxoooxxxx:)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/22/2015 10:21:00 PM

xoxo6xoxo9xoxokiss

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2015 7:45:00 AM

Such a dark intense write with incredible imagery Arthur - am very concerned about the poppers grave sounds like they are having a party! hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/22/2015 12:33:00 AM

OH MY!!!!!!!!!! Arthur....this is absolutely stunning. I can understand the depth of emotions here from what is alluded to in the piece. WOW. Great write....Sad...but good. Can you imagine that I the choice section for submitting poems there is no REVENGE? I think there should be that option, don't you? Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/22/2015 7:42:00 AM

there are many things I would love to see in the 'choice' section - sometimes it is so hard to categorise your poem by the limited choices:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/22/2015 12:37:00 AM

What I write is emotion, what I believe is totally different, I also write not from my view, I try to step in the shoes of others and project their feelings and emotions not mine. So to answer your question simply, no revenge and forgiveness, is always the way to go! :) ( unless is poetry then make them rot in hell!!! LOL )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2015 12:27:00 AM

arthur, a melting pot of feelings so well expressed!.. oh my!.. huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/22/2015 12:32:00 AM

Thank you Nette, part 2 is now posted