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My Mind a Ship In Darkness

My mind a ship in darkness How shall you carry me My heart cut off from loving Is longing to be free To sail out in the morning Upon the early tide And live with in the elements Where truth and strength abide My thoughts are done with islands Where the golden memories play For that vision seen was but a dream Like fog that burns away And if the rocks should catch me up How shall I greet the day So many thoughts are anchored there From ships that passed this way So many swells have come and gone And beaten on the shore You'd think the isle would brake away Be gone and be no more But still the ancient cliffs are hung Like shadows in the sky And still the Sirens songs are sung A lovers lullaby My soul my only compass now What lessons shall you teach As passion sets my course for me Once more into the breach Yet calmly to and steady on Though gale and storm draw near My soul is this immortal thing That strides beyond my fear And gives my life an openness That does not measure cost For much I learned of beauty By what I loved and lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/31/2020 3:47:00 AM
Perfect pace. Windswept course. This poem is a fine example of classic, assured writing.
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Date: 4/21/2017 4:09:00 PM
Nice one Michael :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 1:32:00 PM
wow! Michael... wow! every line pulled me in, in hopes the ending would seek a light house... wow! Love this one....Linda
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:41:00 AM
amazing poetry from you, Michael.
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Date: 8/25/2013 11:52:00 AM
Well done Michael. A life lived through a poem's history. I came to many of the same conclusions. So when we think we are alone with these thoughts, poems like yours tell us otherwise. Allan
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:56:00 PM
captivating lines and visuals. I was pulled into this from the beginning. "My soul my only compass now" So much faith in that one line. Very inspiring :)
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Date: 8/23/2013 4:16:00 PM
Michael...this rang of broken hearts and daring to love again...fear of it...anyway that's where I went....I fell in love with your poem....
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/23/2013 8:31:00 PM
Thank You Donna. Instead of thinking of hearts breaking--try thinking of them deepening with expeariance that will in rich them as time passes.
Date: 8/17/2013 12:48:00 AM
Aha wow and im d admiral eh i mean admirer of this poem coz i was impresd with d anchoring vessel metaphor throughout. Kudos 4 d rhymin.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/18/2013 3:39:00 PM
thank you so much
Date: 8/14/2013 1:58:00 AM
- Michael, this is a wonderful poem, one of your best! - You are very talented! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/19/2013 1:23:00 PM
thanks Anne
Date: 8/12/2013 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful...I can feel your passion deep down in this piece. Each line in this poem was well thought of and blends perfectly well. A lovely poem.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/18/2013 3:42:00 PM
means a lot ,thank you
Date: 8/11/2013 9:59:00 AM
Very nicely said poet love the story of life live and lost.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/18/2013 3:48:00 PM
thanks Sean :Glad you enjoyed the trip.
Date: 8/9/2013 7:36:00 AM
this is profound and heartfelt at the same time.A lovely read. I really enjoyed it and I admire your philosophy on life!
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/19/2013 1:24:00 PM
thank you Andrea
Date: 8/8/2013 6:13:00 AM
Wow!! This is truly Fantastic, write micheal. I did not want it to end,, a beautiful flow of details and emotions, woven into this beautifully written poem. You really ROCK!!!:0) ~<3~ Cherie thankyou4 sharing
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/23/2013 8:33:00 PM
thank you Cherie
Date: 8/7/2013 6:19:00 AM
What an amazingly beautiful lilting tale....I loved the imagery, the depth of emotion, the beauty in every line! WONDERFUL! I agree with Sue-Ellen! A 7 and a FAV. Thanks for your lovely comments on Ophelia...that came from the depths of my heart. So glad that you found a respondent chord. :)
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/23/2013 8:34:00 PM
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/7/2013 6:40:00 AM
always greatful
Date: 8/7/2013 4:27:00 AM
Bravo, brilliant write, excellent rhythm and flow, imagery perfect, I so enjoyed this poem a wee 7 here dear friend and a fav, blessings sueellen
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/7/2013 6:43:00 AM
So glad you liked it .

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