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“What is this strange place we find ourselves in, Trapped in the open, we are free within” Like Walter Mitty I would rather be Inside my head, adventurous and free. Safe sanctuary, thought-provoking kit, Equipped with high caliber tool, called wit. There’s no embargo and there’s no restrain On a free current of wondering brain. No franchise on uniquely designed mind - Cerebral wheel of fortune of mankind. When trapped in the open, against my will, From within I am, liberated still. March 19, 2022 Contest: Matrix Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 4/5/2022 12:55:00 PM
This is Superb! Such brilliant free flowing thoughts! All the best in the contest!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 4/5/2022 2:45:00 PM
Oh thank you Krish, and thank you!
Date: 3/21/2022 9:29:00 PM
"When trapped in the open, against my will, From within I am, liberated still." Excellent, thoughtful writing.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/23/2022 11:22:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/20/2022 12:08:00 PM
Well said, clever girl! Aloha!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/23/2022 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, I don't take it for granted:)

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