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My Mate

He has a lot on his plate, Only you know the date The time and the place That he will give his life away To you. He knows that you Made the ultimate sacrifice, To give all human beings, Life. He knows that he’s been Given a wife who loves him. He’s not accepting the call now, But I know someway and somehow, He will lay his burdens, Down at your feet. I don’t know it in hours, Minutes, seconds, years, months, Or in weeks. He is right now up the creek, Without the right paddle, You. He’s doing what he wants to do. One day my mate will give you The plate and it will be the best Decision that he will ever make.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/12/2009 9:58:00 AM
Hi, Nicole that is an excellent write, I enjoyed reading it. It has a lot of feel to it, I can relate to that. Keep sharing your amazing God given gift. Continuted success!! Donielle S.
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Date: 10/11/2009 2:54:00 PM
I get the picture, up S creek without the right paddle, Jesus! One agreement puts a thousand, two in agreement puts ten thousand to flight. I agree with you he will find his paddle before the creek consumes. Let me know when he does please. Sincerely, love Moses
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