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My Lovers Beyond Compare

I greet you, oh mighty Sun! You who warm us everyone You who glow to make things grow You who melt all ice and snow You are a most mighty one For you rule the sky, oh Sun But my Lover have you seen? Oh Sun, now where have you been? Far stronger he is than you His rays warm me through and through He knows how to “solar” please His heat he turns on with ease At times he warms nice and slow Until I melt, and I flow Then sizzles without a care He drizzles from solar flare He scorches me with his might Defies the coming of night Oh, Sun Prince, can you not see? My Lover’s Sun King to me? Oh, Moon, you send out your beams Enchantress are you of dreams I have named you, Mistress Moon For you make each lover swoon But even YOU can’t compare With my Love! Try, if you dare! Like you, he lights up my night Yet brighter far than YOUR bright Into nights his magic spills Brings to body lunar thrills He makes my wild passion rise To his pull, my heart complies Oh, Mistress Moon, do beware My Lover is much more fair Oh Stars, be snuffed out in shame Your twinkle is not the same As my Lover’s eyes at night Incandescent is his light! They gleam down on me in love When like you, he rides above They engage as he commands, my body with “eye” demands There is not a finer gaze than his eyes that leave a daze Oh, Starlight, you weakened are For his eyes outshine your Star Oh mighty Wind, well you sigh For your strength, I do deny While your gusts can lash and whip and prowess, a soul can grip, My Lover’s strength is much more Than all that you have in store He brings me down to my knees By his breath, a lovely breeze My body you can’t caress His fury makes me undress When he moves, I feel the rush He presses me close, a crush My tresses and every part, he commands with galeful art Oh Wind, you now must subside For from his touch, who can hide? Oh mighty Waves, you that pound that crash with a roaring sound You crest in a foaming spray and leave all in disarray My Lover, breaks over me In waves of sheer ecstasy He builds up a mighty roar Then in tingling crests, I soar He thrashes with might and pounds Till in his white foam I’m gowned When the crest recedes, what bliss, I’m lulled to sleep by his kiss! Oh, mighty Waves, this is true My Love is stronger than you Oh Powers that Be, beware! My Lover’s beyond compare! :) Eileen Manassian :)

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Date: 12/16/2014 8:20:00 PM
"He makes my wild passion rise, to his pull my heart complies..." amazing exchange of attributes in this verse Eileen. You are Legend to me because you consitently reinvent the beauty and bravery of passion Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/15/2014 9:06:00 PM
You must must be the land and fire that he lives. for, a landscape of luscious wonder and heat of healing passion...Bravo on another Masterpiece and FAV. this work and love is what makes you a Legend...Justin
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 3:07:00 AM
If only....If only.... Thank you for this, your sweetest post. It moves me, Justin. To be a legend would be sweet indeed. If I am in your eyes, then that is sweet reward for me. I think I've used sweet a time too many! ;) What can I say...You brought sweetness to my day! Hugs
Date: 12/15/2014 9:01:00 PM
Continued..."At times he warms me nice and slow, until I melt, and I flow, then sizzles without a care, he drizzles from sloar flare, he scortches me with his might, defies the coming of night..." awesome erotica and smooth rhyming. I could just go on quoting the entire composition, its just delcious from top to bottom Eileen. The way you coincide the strengths and enchantments of these natural wonders to your lover's power and effect on your mind and body is truly brlliant woman...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:05:00 AM
Yes, I did like that bit myself....There is beauty in the slow burn as there is in the rapid scorching of passion. Each has its time depending on so many things. I sometimes wonder if what I write is sensual or erotic. I guess the interpretation also is key to that, don't you think? You definitely are a sensual man and may interpret my work anyway you like. "Delicious from the top to bottom." I don't know how you do it, but even your posts are just flaming....Lovely. This woman thanks you, Justin.
Date: 12/15/2014 8:49:00 PM
Oh wow, how passionately blasphemous you are Eileen...stunning celebration of your lover's predominance over the primordial giants of life itself! To experience a love that supersedes the majesty of all these enormous and vital wonders has made you the most lovely and steadfast devotee! The one you love has spurred your genius to a new grade of passion...wow!!! J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 3:03:00 AM
Hello, my Eagle. I'm so glad to finally get a visit from you after such a long period of silence. It brings my heart joy. I'm a very intense person...I live in the superlatives, and if not live...then I dream in the superlative. It is the only way I know how to live and be. Thank you for your sweet post, Justin. I've missed you words and thoughts.
Date: 12/10/2014 10:43:00 PM
Oh wow my dear....so much love...sorry getting to you so late trying to catch up..not enough hours in the day...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/9/2014 11:53:00 AM
Long list of loved lovers lovely labours and love of life in and beyond the river .Congrat.O.B.
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:27:00 AM
Hello Eileen, some great comments here.
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Date: 12/7/2014 9:46:00 PM
Eileen, what a passionate sharing of two souls, and you've done so well in putting this feeling of the heart into words of love and devotion bravo, and thanks for your comment on my poem farewell my friend, he was a good man and to mean deserved such a wonderful tribute, cheri
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Date: 12/7/2014 3:47:00 PM
Ow my Eileen... What a powerful love poem..What an amaZing poem.I am favouriting this gem.. You WoWed me ! : )
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:04:00 AM
This is Epic and so Beautifuly written! A Fav!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 2:47:00 PM
A Fav? For me? How sweet, Maurice. I'm so glad! Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 10:53:00 AM
- Life beautiful items in one beautiful and romantic poem, Eileen dear - Enjoy reading this poem, thank you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 2:47:00 PM
Hugs to you, my Sunshine! Glad you dropped by! :)
Date: 12/7/2014 10:49:00 AM
Even the firmament knows it evel,It dares not...kudos to you voice of love...huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 2:48:00 PM
:) That is a sweet compliment. Thank you.
Date: 12/7/2014 8:59:00 AM
You both must be exhausted, this is an epic of tsunamic proportions! I enjoyed this passionate adventure.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 9:07:00 AM
;) Thank you, Rick.....A tsunami of passion would be amazing! :) Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 8:30:00 AM
Dear dear....you've taken the powers of the universe and tamed them....again....expertly written my dear...MD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:43:00 AM
MD...I miss you. Hope all is well. I wonder where you've been and what's been keeping you. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 8:30:00 AM
simply incredible Eileen - am lost for words my friend!!! hugs jan xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, my sweet. I love it when that happens. :)
Date: 12/7/2014 8:08:00 AM
Ah, you do know the power of Love and that is what I calling reveling in love. Outstanding job -- I loved the way you interplayed the nature with nurture . . . you are a wise and gifted writer -- deep will I drink from your words!! Love and hugs little one! A fav and 7+
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:46:00 AM
I love to revel in romance, love, and passion. To bathe myself in these thoughts and to dream! :) Thank you so much for your kind comments. Nothing makes me happier than when I write something that I am content with. Drink deep. Hugs from the Little One! :)
Date: 12/7/2014 6:50:00 AM
Hello Elleen. Very imaginative. I was IMPRESSED beyond...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Valerie. So glad to hear from you. :) Welcome to my page.
Date: 12/7/2014 6:32:00 AM
Awesome love poem Eileen! So beautiful and filled of happinees and warmth. A 7 for you! Have a very lovely day! :) Xxxx D.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Dorian. I try to grab happiness when it comes to visit and give it a tight squeeze. It is an all too illusive guest. Hugs
Date: 12/7/2014 5:07:00 AM
Indeed love is strongest of all be it mighty waves or winds !! So true so true my dear lovely Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:48:00 AM
My sweet Dr Upma...Always...always good to see your smiling face. Bless you, my dear!

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