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My Loved Hero

I've written of him oft before, You will find him on my pages My daddy was my big hero Who was wiser than the sages. I'll admit there have been others Whom I have let into my heart. But my daddy need not worry. No one could ever take his part. He worked hard for his family And never seemed to think of self. If he had needs or wants at all He kept them on an empty shelf. He lived through those depression days Working hard and doing his best. He asked God to send sun and rain And promised he would find the rest. I shared him with my six siblings, They claimed him as their hero too. He labored for us six days then Saved Sunday to give God his due. 4/25/17

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Date: 5/28/2018 9:17:00 AM
Brilliant poem! Outstanding
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Date: 5/28/2018 6:58:00 AM
Amazing......brilliant poem. In awe. -JWE
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Date: 8/10/2017 9:49:00 PM
Well done Quatrain.
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:36:00 PM
A 7 for this winning poem, Joyce. Janice
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Date: 4/26/2017 10:48:00 PM
Joyce, This is so heartfelt and beautiful. Your father sounds like an amazing man. I am lucky to have a loving father. I am certain your father knew how much you loved him. You sure did him the honour of writing this loving poem. :)
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Date: 4/26/2017 1:41:00 PM
I only pray that he knew how much I appreciated him and how proud I was to call him Daddy. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:16:00 AM
He sounds wonderful Joyce. You're so fortunate to have a loving father. I never even met mine. This is a beautiful tribute to his love for his family. 7 ; )
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:27:00 AM
Dear Joyce, Amazing tribute to your father. The world needs more men like him and more poets like you! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 4/26/2017 2:21:00 AM
- A lovely tribute to your father, Joyce - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/26/2017 1:56:00 AM
Nicely penned, an enjoyable read and great tribute....
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