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My Love… My Love… Aren't you real? You, my dear! You, my dear! Am I awake? Are you here? Are you here? Your voice echoes, in my dream, too extreme, Like a mirage, you are near, you are near. If you are here or sincere, reappear! Pain from your love, too severe, too severe. With the morning breeze, I'm the lips; you're the kiss. No matter what, do appear, do appear. Not having you in my dreams, I will cry, Come back again, do not fear, do not fear What’s real? Love is real? Is it true? If that is real, can you hear? Can you hear? I seek nothing, no more glee, no more fright. Only your love is sincere, is sincere. Silent Haloo, you’re drunk. Love will remain; No more crying, no more tears, no more tear. 5/1/2016 Haloo

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Date: 12/3/2018 11:36:00 AM
In your poetry Love seems fallen in love with Love. I do not if it is a poetical ”I”, or personal experience, too. A poem mirroring subtle teachings of Rumi. Also, a thinker like Kierkegaard tried to classify and find a hierarchy intellectual/spiritual (Christian)love/ and personal love. His own life was marked/changed by such a choice. Corinthians 13 also is one of the most wonderful lines from Bible, explaining love as charity.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/3/2018 6:37:00 PM
Very nice statement Love seems fallen in love with love... Rumi is a prophet to me... I have all his books... thank you.
Date: 6/17/2017 11:15:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, yeah it s true that when someone you loved with all your heart left you or went away it seems like your purpose of living has ended, I truly wish from hear that you find your love and remain happy with him/her all your life, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/18/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thank you Faraz...... Okay ... I will..
Date: 6/6/2016 9:06:00 PM
Sincere love without fear is the the only one to seek, wonderful write and congrats on your win. Hugs
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/7/2016 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia. Are you thinking about my suggestion....
Date: 6/6/2016 10:14:00 AM
Beautiful Ghazal my lovely friend read from you. i am inspired by you to write Rubai, so just written. Please read to confirm whether that's right or not. About your Ghazal, i say it's very nice. A 7 i feel. Loved always, bl
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/6/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thanks BL, I'll take a look soon......
Date: 5/20/2016 11:57:00 AM
The repetition is very effective here. Fine work, my friend. Love, daver
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/20/2016 3:25:00 PM
Thank you very much....Thank you very much....Thank you very much....Thank you very much....
Date: 5/9/2016 2:09:00 PM
Lovely Ghazal on love beautifully expressed my lovely friend. If music is added with it, it will be hit. A 7 sure. Loved always, bl
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/9/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your remarks.
Date: 5/7/2016 2:26:00 AM
Nice ghazal. Feel glad to read. Congratulations on ur win. Definitely 7 from me.........//:) hugs
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/9/2016 7:53:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, thanks for kind words
Date: 5/5/2016 6:21:00 PM
Great write! Congrats on win!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/6/2016 7:24:00 PM
Thank you very much..
Date: 5/3/2016 7:56:00 PM
Congratulations Pashang on the placement of the contest
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/3/2016 10:47:00 PM
Thanks Nayda, you're always very nice to me. thanks for selecting my work.
Date: 5/3/2016 7:36:00 PM
Pashang, congratulations on your win on how you feel about love around the world. Hugs Eve
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/3/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thanks Eve.... Love is a gift, a gift of sight; It lets you see in the darkest night. Love is light and light is warm. If you got it, trust the storm.
Date: 5/3/2016 4:21:00 PM
Pashang, congrats on your win in the contest :)-luloo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/3/2016 10:46:00 PM
Thanks Luloo... congratulations to you too..
Date: 5/2/2016 3:51:00 PM
Great Ghazal, Pashang. The ere rhyme was a great choice!!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/3/2016 2:27:00 AM
Thank you my dear. I 'm glad you liked it...
Date: 5/1/2016 1:59:00 PM
Nice to read.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/3/2016 2:25:00 AM
Thank you Sir...

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