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My Love

MY LOVE***** My tussle with nature will be fruitless If not for that, I will fight for a millenia Just to spend my life with you I will make our love awestruck for your progeny And posterity will make us a monument To hail always till the end of time Because a facsimile of our love will be impossible Romeo and juliet will be exchange with our names And the act of Delaila will be extinct Trust will be our backbone Faithfulness will be our weapon And loyalty will always sheild us Seldom will there be fighting or quarreling Because of our perfection Which strengthens our affection

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Date: 7/28/2015 8:36:00 PM
Derrick, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:34:00 PM
Derrick, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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