My Love

I dwell on my memories about you, I once loose hope and wake up without you in my heart. I never thought I would ever admit how precious you are to me, but little did I know that my soul and yours are mate. I love your name especially you, you are beautiful and deceitful, I believe you have super powers, because every time I think about you my heart melt.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 1:59:00 PM

Busani, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 4/15/2015 6:12:00 PM

BUSANI, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Busani Zuma
Date: 4/18/2015 4:07:00 AM

thank you for such a nice welcoming gesture SKAT A will do that

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2015 7:05:00 AM

- I wish you Busani and your first poem here at the P Soup welcome - Always nice with new "poet" friends - Good luck, looking forward to many more poems in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Busani Zuma
Date: 4/18/2015 4:09:00 AM

am so grateful for such an welcoming am looking at your work as we speak