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My Love

In my dream I met A young lady in fret Immediately I had a desire Like a moth drawn to fire For she did need a hero though To save her from life’s woe’s Such beauty I have never seen Not even in any other dream BUT THEN I got swept away From life’s woes who led me astray I longed for you both day and night “Angel from God” so bright It seem now that I’m in need To be saved from these woes-take heed! Will I ever wake from this heavenly-hell state? Who is this in the far I see? It is you! Am I free? At last you came for me As if sent from Thee Suddenly I’m awake Was this all fake? But who is this next to me my beautiful wife sent from Thee My life with you is no dream and your name now I know, Corine Who would’ve known in her so sweet When I kissed those little feet Was our beautiful baby girl Her skin as white as pearl

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Date: 9/11/2013 8:45:00 AM
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:44:00 AM
Hi Michael, this one I would call rhymes... or a far away couplet poem. The flow and rhyme pattern are beautiful. I hope your wife loves the poem..I know i sure did. Corine is such a lovely name. Thanks for sharing the beauty from your heart.. Is the little girl in the avatar your daughter... sweet... from Linda
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Date: 9/11/2013 12:03:00 AM
I do not know in what form this poet is written, but i will go study the diffrent style and forms from now on..
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