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My Love

You say you know how much I love you but... never quite seems enough when the words leave my mouth

For as long as the sun burns, as long as the stars are bright...
     ...that is just a minuscule monument to my fiery devotion

You are the first idea in my head when I greet the morning sun...
     ...and the last I think of when I lay my head to rest

My only wish for you is to be at least as happy as I am and... feel your life is entwined completely with mine

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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 7:50:00 AM
    A fluid, resonating flow of emotion here. I miss feeling this way. Wonderfully expressed.

    Kelley Avatar James Kelley
    Date: 3/1/2014 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is an interesting tidbit! Congratulations!
    Kelly Avatar Renee Kelly
    Date: 3/1/2014 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I've been trying to get back into writing poems. I am one of those who just gets these bursts of inspiration followed by years of nada :) Interesting tidbit, I just got married in January to a man with *almost* your exact name (no second "e" in the last name).
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:54:00 PM
    Renee,,.love is a word we really can't describe.. i mean...some call it I'm too old for them...butterflies.. entwined love is the best.... good poem...pd