My Love

You tell me that you love me And I know that this is true I feel it in every word you say And in everything you do We've had our share of ups & downs All the couples do But the difference between us & them... We have faith & push on through. You never mind to wait on me To do my hair & nails You tell me that I'm beautiful Even when I look like hell. Our past has made us stronger It's made us who we are We started out as kids in love Our love has come so far. So here is to my one true love With whom I'll share my life I can't express how blessed I feel To know that I'm your wife.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 5:14:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mandy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Lakisa Battie

Date: 5/15/2011 2:44:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup where words express our inner most feelings and enjoyin reading n commenting on other Poets writes...... Wonderful write and nicely expressed.....

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 1:41:00 PM

passionate feelings of love lovely expressions, mandy

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/14/2011 12:05:00 AM

Very good work here Mandy. I believe that this is a rhyme. You did excellent with it. Keep writing:) R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2011 6:59:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 3:48:00 PM

Manday, what a lovely way to feel what it is... a couple from heaven.. glad you and him share that great love... take care and may God bless you with much more marrier smiles... p.d.