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My Love

As I lay at night, across my bed, Thoughts roaming back to you. I dream about what lies ahead, Your smile, your eyes, sea blue.... Thoughts roaming back to you, My love grows deeper still. Your smile, your eyes, sea blue, Brighten up my world so real.... My love grows deeper still, With words you choose so sweet. Brighten up my world so real, You make my life complete... With words you choose so sweet, How could I deny your love? You make my life complete, Your a gift from God above.... How could I deny your love? After all that we have shared. Your a gift from God above, Even though, we are so scared.... After all that we have shared, Each day I love you more. Even though, we are so scared, These feelings we can't ignore.... Each day I love you more, Recalling sweet words you've said. These feelings we can't ignore, As I lay at night, across my bed....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/6/2012 9:46:00 PM
DIXIE, Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care. *Luv* PD
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:30:00 AM
Dixie....Wonderful write, I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Congratulations on being featured by Poetry Soup this week...............S.Ronthorpe.
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Date: 2/13/2012 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dixie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:20:00 AM
Very good. I loved the rythm. R.M.
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:01:00 PM
Dixie.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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Date: 5/10/2011 6:05:00 AM
Hi Dixie-I enjoyed reading this. I especially like the way you have combined intelligence and art to write using the pantoum form.I admire your ability to do this yet still write from the heart using your natural gift as a poet. Congratulations on being featured.You deserve it.To my mind a very worthy piece.I would also like to add my thanks for your kind comments on my own work. Love June(sylvia)
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dixie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, dixie
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:13:00 PM
Congrats dixie on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..on this special day of luv..
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Date: 5/2/2011 10:41:00 PM
Dixie The world is do divine when you are in love! I feel that in your poem! You are scared but love will prevail! I am educating myself of poetry forms, still in my elementaries but I just write from my heart and ignore the rules. Thank you for commenting on my poem. It seems so spontaneous to just write a simple poem based on the reflections of daily activities. Dalila
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Date: 5/2/2011 10:37:00 PM
Very nice Dixie. Good rhyme. Good rhythym. Good thought. Gotta give you a seven on that rating. Rockman (R. Pritts)
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Date: 5/1/2011 2:10:00 PM
Perfect write !!! Welcome to the poet family x sarah x
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Date: 5/1/2011 11:29:00 AM
Interesting Pantoum..Welcome to soup...May your stay be long with many more writes like this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:30:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Dixie ... so enjoyed reading your most creative romantic write and appreciate the sentiments u wrote on my ROMANCE poem.. hope your time on P.S. is fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too.. they are free to enter and one sure way to get your poetry read more often luv.. good luck from the "Sweetheart" of P.S...
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Date: 5/1/2011 6:53:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dixie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 6:37:00 AM
Dixie, welcome to Poetrysoup. I think your poem is just beautiful. I invite you to enter my contest called For(four)Beautiful Birds. I think you would write an amazing poem. If you have questins, soupmail me~~
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:38:00 AM
great pantoum. I am honored to be the first. thank you for your lovely comment on my work
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