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My Love

one vow one order one blow here inexorable from you my love show me the way with chains these shackles so cold and passionate my love you promised and here we are together forever 'til death do us part' my love it's been such a long time since i paid for your mistakes do you see us there? smiling my love you thought you got away but here we are again! no running! besides; this knife is so sweet my love R.Thomas '10

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Date: 7/7/2010 9:14:00 AM
Hey Ryan! Excellent piece of work, though dark, sometimes that's reality. Enjoyed reading this. Your talent speaks, guy! Will read more along the way. Welcome to PS and the more you read and leave comments, enter contests, your poems will get read and points will grow! Let me introduce you to another poet whose work you might enjoy: Jimmy Anderson..Have a good day, Ryan. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:39:00 PM
Well written; dark, but well written! -Laura
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:27:00 PM
thank you very much! i really appreciate it!
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:26:00 PM
lol cool and sweet loving write,, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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