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My Love

My Love, Rachel Your skin glows like the flower, blossoms fascinating as the rose in the purest hope of spring. My yearning heart rises to your melodic voice and leaps like a rabbit at the whisper of your name, Rachel. The evening ascends in on a great sparrow wing. I am calmed by your coat that I carry into the twilight of lovebeams and hold next to my heart. I am filled with hope that I may dry your tears of regret. As my finger falls from my scarf, it reminds me of your warmth. In the hushed, I listen for the last sound of the spring. My heated gaze leaps to my skies. I wait in the crystal moonlight for your secret song so that we may love as one, gaze to gaze, in search of the glorious bright and spiritual threshold of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/7/2012 5:08:00 PM
A wonderful tribute Jay! Beautiful:)
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:38:00 PM
awe im sure this poem was intended to be read by Racheal maybe your girlfriend
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Date: 1/29/2010 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful indeed..Charma
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Date: 1/21/2010 1:35:00 PM
a deep and beautiful tribute. really great write James
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Date: 1/20/2010 1:39:00 PM
beautiful!!! you really must show this to her! it is so powerfully emotional! keep it up! ------Ell
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Date: 1/15/2010 12:33:00 PM
Very lucky girl. Great write.
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Date: 1/9/2010 11:04:00 AM
I agree with rain this girl is very extremely lucky to have a guy like you. Your seem really nice. I hope you have love always, Brittany
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today James. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2010 11:26:00 AM
:) i think u will be married some day. lol with a heart like that u will want to :P
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