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My Love

The radiant glimmer of mine A golden lustre you shine. You have painted my soul with your tint Every place you touch is an invisible print. Even in darkness, we glance With a blind tune, we dance. You can call me by your name We are two sides of twin fire flame. To your song, now I rise Because love is paradise. You have shown me eternity is true My darling, I love you. 7th March 2023

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Date: 3/8/2023 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 3/8/2023 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 3/6/2023 6:06:00 PM
this is a very sweet declaration, loved the rhymes yann
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 3/6/2023 9:03:00 PM
Thanks so much
Date: 3/6/2023 5:53:00 PM
This might be a good entry for Regina's contest: For You, Love Poetry Contest, Akanksha. It's lovely :)
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 3/6/2023 9:04:00 PM
Thank you! I'll check it out

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