My Love

Missing you so much my love when you were taken without warning Yesterdays are all that’s left of precious memories in my heart Leaving is so bitter sweet for now you're free to roam, all binds are now untied Only then your spirit soared, now at liberty just like white feathers in the breeze Verily your heart and soul can now meander freely to wander where you please Eventually our souls will meet I'll hear you call out mum as I see my only son... Written 24th May 2021 Contest BITE SIZE POEM 2 Sponsor Line Gauthier 2nd PLACE Contest ALL YOURS (MAY 29) Sponsor Brian Strand

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Carol Mitra

Date: 5/29/2021 6:13:00 PM

This really touched my heart....Congrats on your win Ann :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 7:29:00 AM

Dear Carol thank you so much for your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/29/2021 12:35:00 PM

A heart touching acrostic, Ann! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 7:29:00 AM

Dear Kim I appreciate your kind words thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2021 10:48:00 AM

oh Ann I know how you miss your beloved son and Frank and so many poems are inspired by your loss, write on my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 7:27:00 AM

Awww Jan thank you so much my friend... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/29/2021 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my friend. You have woven into your poem your grief but also a beautiful picture of the freedom you picture for your son and your ultimate reunion. This touched my heart Ann. Blessings to you!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 7:27:00 AM

Bless you dear Sam and thanks for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2021 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Acrostic write but sad. So Sorry. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Paula for your congratulations my friend - yes I miss him dreadfully... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2021 8:31:00 AM

So sad to lose a son. Heartfelt poem, Ann, and congrats to you.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/6/2021 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for your congrats, I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/24/2021 5:24:00 AM

Ah cruel death, how many heartaches it gives. We all have to be strong. Hugs

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Victor, I know you understand... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/24/2021 4:27:00 AM

A beautiful tribute to your son Ann, he lives on in your heart and the happy memories that you have.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 6:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom, not a day goes by when I think of him and Frank... with kindest thoughts Ann xx