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My Lost Valentine

Today, I sleep with a thorn pricked in my heart, Tomorrow I'd wake up with the same pain as before. As I closed my eyes, I dream of you; Kissing me to wake up and accept the truth. And in the middle of the night I awoke sadly, My heart bleeds like stabbed by a thousand daggers Then I tell myself, "If this is what losing love means, I'd rather sleep forever, bleed and be found dead."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/12/2011 11:41:00 PM
Thanks Robert. I really appreciate it!;)
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:57:00 PM
Nice wording in this entry. It is very descriptive and a good presentation for Valentine's Day.
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