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My Lost Moments Can Be Relived

So many wonderful days I have missed being apart; ah, they're limitless to count with their charming, romantic ways! A delicate, pleasant scent I left on those young lips softer than velvet; oh, it must have been the sweetness of my Valetine's chocolate kisses! My lost moments can be relived through past memories... if I dare to look back, making believe time stood still: to recapture escaped dreams from a boy's teary eyes that wanted to live them out with a most desperate will. Whoever feels the absence of someone he loved from a true, innocent heart, ought to feel some sympathy and share that secret with me; I would love to smell and touch those flowers I sent to my lonely sweetheart... when I stare at a cloudless sunset setting on the calmest sea. My lost moments can be relived and still be cherished as they were then...if only fantasy could turn into reality, and fate stopped time in its track as it should! It might be ureal or out of reach, but not an impossibility!

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Date: 11/7/2010 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 1:01:00 PM
Hopeful ending there, I wish you new beginning. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:06:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrew. So glad to see this poem receive well-deserved recognition. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:42:00 AM
THE CONTEST IS OVER AND YOU ARE THE WINNER..SARA
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:24:00 PM
Andrew, I thank you for supporting my contest with your beautifully touching Rhyme..It's unfortunate that our world is not ready for our fantasies to become realities..but hopefully one day. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your success in the top ten placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win,Andrew
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Date: 11/5/2010 10:57:00 AM
Soup mail in a moment, Andrew
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Date: 11/4/2010 1:19:00 PM
Memories of these "lost moments" can bring both comfort and pain, Andrew. I will "share my secret" -- it's very hard when someone you love suddenly leaves your life. Many of us wish we could go back in time, but all we can do is move forward and hope to make new memories with a future love. You touched my heart, Andrew. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:39:00 AM
Quite a romantic write on my lost moments cAn be relived with fine expressions, Andrew
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