My Lord - Candle of Hope
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(Candle of Hope)
In
Him I
Have it all
He's my Savior
Always there ready
Just to protect
Defend me
All the
Time
'Cause He's my Champion
With Him my sins are gone
In Him there's mighty power
Many things helps me bear
'Cause He's my Champion
Jesus Christ is my King
He saves,for Him heart sing
Anything for me would do
'Cause He's my Champion
Through His Book we can grow
Two-thousand years ago came
And saved us from Hell's flame
'Cause He's my Champion
He died upon a tree...
And thru Him death just flee
I want to live thru Him
'Cause He's my Champion
Without Christ life is grim
Jesus sees "you" not sin
With Him, you always win
'Cause He's my champion;With Him my sins are gone.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
aka ladylove
copyright@2014
December,04,2014
"Candle of Hope" is a new poetry style, created by
Dorian Petersen Potter, (aka ladydp2000/ aka ladylove) on October 19,2009
The pattern for this style goes like this:
First start with the wick of the candle and that's 9 line in total.
Syllable count for the wick is: 1.2.3.4.5.4.3.2.1.
Then the body of the candle is 20 lines in total.
The syllable count is: 6 syllables in each line.
And the format is: A1,2,3,4,A1,6,7,8,A1,10,11,12,A1,14,15,16,A1,18,19,20.
The bottom,(line 21)that's the last line, at the end of candle(candleholder)consists
of 12 syllables and is composed from lines A1 and line 2.These two lines combined together form the base of the candle or candleholder.Now these two lines can be separated either by a period,semi-period or a comma.This is the poet's choice.
Rhyme is optional.
Subject:It must be either spiritual,uplifting or inspirational.
Thank you for reading.
Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2014
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