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"Candle of Hope" is a new poetry style, created by
Dorian Petersen Potter, on October 19,2009

The pattern for this style goes like this:
First start with the wick of the candle and that's 9 line in total.
Syllable count for the wick is: 1.2.3.4.5.4.3.2.1.
Then the body of the candle is 20 lines in total.
The syllable count is: 6 syllables in each line.
And the format is: A1,2,3,4,A1,6,7,8,A1,10,11,12,A1,14,15,16,A1,18,19,20.
The bottom,(line 21)that's the last line, at the end of candle(candleholder)consists
of 12 syllables and is composed from lines A1 and line 2.These two lines combined together form the base of the candle or candleholder.Now these two lines can be separated either by a period,semi-period or a comma.This is the poet's choice.
Rhyme is optional.
Subject:It must be either spiritual,uplifting or inspirational.

 

In Him I Have it all He's my Savior Always there ready Just to protect Defend me All the Time 'Cause He's my Champion With Him my sins are gone In Him there's mighty power Many things helps me bear 'Cause He's my Champion Jesus Christ is my King He saves,for Him heart sing Anything for me would do 'Cause He's my Champion Through His Book we can grow Two-thousand years ago came And saved us from Hell's flame 'Cause He's my Champion He died upon a tree... And thru Him death just flee I want to live thru Him 'Cause He's my Champion Without Christ life is grim Jesus sees "you" not sin With Him, you always win 'Cause He's my champion; With Him my sins are gone! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 October,19,2014

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Date: 10/21/2014 9:08:00 AM
striking candle held me inside powerful piece of writing dorian love how it ended
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/23/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D
Date: 10/20/2014 8:42:00 PM
"D" . . . I'm in awe of your various writes tonight. This one is an automatic "7" from me. I'm a person of detail and precision and I do like very much the articulation of your new poetic style as mentioned above in your author's notes. The "Candleholder Format" is quite artful and novel. I am totally impressed with this format approach, and, BTW -- writing about Jesus is inspirational always. Brilliant Work!! Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary ( I have to remember this format too!!)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/23/2015 12:20:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, Gary,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

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